my story.(:

lol, thanks bren.
its kinda long like a book.
& i just make it up as i go.
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I like it i think it is really good and long you are a very good think froddy!

sorry i havent been writing.
i'll write nao. ;D


continuing..
at school the next day..
''JESS!'' I scream from the end of the hall.
It caused attention but whatever.
Jess runs over to me and says ''Haha. Yeah?''
''I met a guy yesterday at the mall, He gave me his number, Should I call him?''
I replied.
''Of course!'' she giggled.
So after school, I pick up the phone and dial Josh's number.
''Hello?'' He said.
I was scared to say anything.
''Hi Josh..It's me.'' I said.
''Emily..Emily..Oh HEY! I remember you.'' He starts laughing. ''Would you like to go on a date with me tomorrow night?''
''Sure.'' I hang up the phone.
At school I couldn't pay any attention.
I was too nervous.
I mean, I'm a straight A student. I can do this.
When the school bell rang, I think I had butterflies.
He was supposed to be at my house at seven.
So I have four hours.
Four. So I run into my room, ''WHAT AM I GONNA WEAR?'' freaking out.
So I decided to wear a cute blue v-shirt. It was casual, but not fancy.
Also, a pair of my jeans.
The door bell rings. ''OH NO! It's Josh!'' I squealed.
I answered the door and said ''It's for me, Mother!''
''Okay kids, you have fun. Josh I expect her home by 11 or 12.'' she said.
''Yes mam.'' He smiled.
He was so gorgeous that night, His eyes were brown, with dark brown hair.
He was taking me to the movies, To watch the Notebook. How romantic.
''This is one of my favorite movies of all time.'' He whispered in my ear.


OOOH! suspense. :] i'll write more later. ;D

good Grammer! ;]

Good grammar also.

Cool! Ehhh, da hunk guys are always da idiots . That josh guy sounds like a stalker/sexual offender, since you didnt say his age lol, but anyone wit the name josh has to be a beast ;D
(p.s. always go for the nerdy track kids girls! just a reminder to all girls out der)

continuing..


Later that night, I was sitting in my room listening to music..
The phone rang. My mom enters my room and says ''It's for you, Emily.''
I answered the phone by saying ''Hello?''
It was Jess.
''Okay, Wanna know what happend?'' she said.
''YES, YES, YES!'' I said in a happy tone.
''I met a guy.'' she whispered.
''A guy, Who?'' I said.
''His name is Michael.'' she said.
''He better be cute!'' I said giggling.
''Oh, trust me, He's a hunk!'' she said.
She went on and on, For 15 minutes about the guy.
He sounds perfect.
But the whole conversation depressed me, Cause no guys at my school like me.
''I gotta go.'' I lied.
''Oh okay, See ya tomorrow!'' she said as she hung up the phone.
After that, I laid in my bed thinking.
I wish I was Jessica. All the guys like her.
But oh well, I'm just Emily. Boring, Ugly, Nobody likes her, Emily Davis.
It was 10:04. Jessica called me back.
''Hey Em, Wanna go to the mall with me tomorrow?'' she asked.
''Sure. Pick me up tomorrow after school.'' I replied.
I hung up the phone after that and fell asleep.
After school the next day, Jessica arrived at my house.
''Whoa, Jess! Nice car! When did ya get it?'' I squealed.
''I got it for my 16th birthday, You like?'' She said.
''I loooove!'' I said as I jumped in the car.
She drove off to the mall.
''Ahh, Green Wood Mall, hasn't changed a bit.'' I said.
Jess was looking around in the shoes, As I was outside the shop looking at the 50 cent necklaces.
I saw a cross necklace I thought was cute!
But all I had was a dollar.
All of a sudden, A guy walks up to me and says, ''Need change?''
''Would you mind?'' I said.
''Nah, It's okay. You can have it.'' He hands me 50 cents and a paper wad above it.
I threw the paper wad into the floor. He fell out of his pocket, I guess. Ha.
I put the 50 cents into the machine, And got the cross necklace.
''Here, I'll put it on for you.'' He said.
He put the necklace on me and said, ''The names Josh. Nice to meet you.''
''Emily.'' I replied.
He laughed and said ''Emily, Very nice name. I guess I'll see you around..Maybe.''
He walked off. I picked up that paper wad on the floor and it had his number on it.
Jess walked out with her shopping bags and said ''What happend?'' she said in concern.
''Nothing, nothing at all.'' I smiled.

Nice, pretty hard to read because of the side bar --> but 's okay.

ehhhh..
yeah i will tomorrow if ya want. ;D
too lazy tonight lol.

Pretty Good! You gonna add anything else?

okay i'm just gonna try writing a story..if yall dont like it i'll delete the topic :]
so here it goes. it's pretty cheesy..so guys might not wanna read it haha.
sorry for the incorrect grammer and what not. D:
and if it's too innapropriate pm me.

I open up my eyes. Ugh, Another day of school. Great.
Then, My mother knocks on my door and comes in slightly.
''You awake, sweety?'' said my mother.
''Yeah, I'm awake.'' I said in a grumpy voice.
''Okay, Hurry get ready! Don't wanna be late for work.'' she replied.
As I'm brushing my teeth, I look at my wrist and see the scar..The cut..
The memories..The pain..The everything.
My mom and dad divorced 5 months ago. In that short 5 months, She re-married..to a guy named Phil.
So as I run down the stairs to rush out the door to the car, My mom yells, ''Wait for me!''
On our way to school, My mom was going on and on about her new job. She was happy, so I was happy.
As we pulled up to my school, I groaned. I hate school, but I do it just to make my dad proud.
I got out of the car..as I was about to open the school doors Phil says ''Bye hunny! Love ya!''
As I entered the school, I approached my best friend, Jessica, but I call her Jess for short. We are pretty alike, but sometimes, Different.
''How was your weekend, Jess?'' I said.
She smiled.
''Uh oh. You're happy. What happend?'' I replied.
''I'll call you tonight and tell you..Enough about me, How was your weekend?'' she giggled.
''Ehhhh..'' I mumbled.
''Is it still that whole Phil thing?'' she said.
I looked away.
''Gah Em! Phil is a great guy! Give him a chance. Please?'' she cried.
''I tried..'' I then heard the bell, So I rushed down the hallway.

sooo..that's just the first part.
do you like it? do you hate it?
opinions please!
how can i make it better? [: